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One day a 36 year old mom and her 18 year old daughter decided to have their own little party with just the two of them. The mom is a gym teacher and has an AMAZING figure. Her breasts are big, she's got a perfect ass and has well toned legs. She's wearing a tank top and black sport leggings. Her daughter is also very athletic and has tanned skin and blonde hair and, like her mother, a great figure. She's wearing a miniskirt and a tank top.

They had gotten everything ready for their party of two and started playing their music over their stereo at full volume. It was nighttime and all the neighbors were trying to sleep. Many of them, despite the loud music, did. Except for the old lady next door. She was a very cranky old woman with dentures instead of real teeth, a wrinkled face and a cane. She was wearing a pink dress with flowers on it.

The old lady couldn't sleep because the music was way too loud. She decided to walk over to the house next door and confront the family. She knocked at their door. The music stopped and  the mom came to the door with her daughter busy sitting in the living room and drinking soda.

"Is there a problem?", asked the mom. "As a matter of fact there is.", replied the old woman. "Would you be so kind as to turn off that music? You're preventing me from sleeping." The young mom looked at her with a puzzled look. "Look", she began sarcastically "why don't you just  go to the nearest old folks home where you belong, ok?" She proceeded to slam the door in front of the old woman. The music started up again.

The old woman was insulted and enraged. She wanted to teach that family a lesson. She knocked on the door once again. The mom answered, this time with her daughter, and both received a smack on their heads with the old woman's cane.

When the mother awoke, she found herself and her daughter tied up in their basement. Her hands had been tied around her washing machine, and her feet had been tied together. Her daughter lay on the opposite side of the basement, except she had been tied up against the wall in an X-position, wrists tied to poles along the ceiling, feet tied to two different  baskets, each filled with bricks to prevent their moving around.

The mom asked herself what was going on. Then she saw the old lady come down to the basement. "Hey granny, untie us!", she screamed, enraged. "I don't think so dearie.", said the old woman "I am gonna have to teach you and your daughter how to be more neighborly. She sat down next to the mom and began moving her fingers up and down the mom's stomach. "H-hey! Whahahat do you think you ahahare doing?", the mom giggled since she was quite ticklish. The old lady said nothing and continued to tickle the mom's belly for a while.

Since all she was getting out of the mom were a few giggles, the old lady decided to take it up a notch. She grabbed a feather and began moving it up and down the mom's stomach. She had pulled up the mom's shirt to make it tickle even more. The mom began to laugh. It still wasn't enough for the old lady. She decided to pull up the mom's shirt all the way up, exposing her black bra. "I'm sure you won't mind me playing with those for a while.", said the old lady, slowly beginning to brush the feather against the mom's boobs. "NOHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!", screamed the mom "NOHOHOHOHOT THEHEHEHEHEREHEHEHEHEHE! PLEAHAHAHAHAHAHASEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE!". She had now begun shaking herself violently to try and get away from the feather rubbing against her sensitive skin.

This continued for about 15 minutes until the old lady decided it was time to move on to the girl. She had just awoken recently, after hearing her mother laugh like crazy. "Please don't tickle me miss.", the young girl pleaded. The old lady said "You two aren't neighborly enough yet, but you will be soon."

As the old lady got closer, the young girl began to shake her head. The old lady approached the girl with a feather and began lifting the girl's tank top when she reached her. She ran the feather all across the poor girl's belly. "NOHAHAHAHAHA! IHAHAHAHAHAHAHAT TICKLEHEHEHEHEHEHEHES!", the young girl screamed, and shook her head around. She was a lot more ticklish than her mom.

The old lady liked this reaction from the girl, but gave her a short brake anyway. She thought of a better spot to tickle her anyway. She lifted up her miniskirt, revealing her pink panties. The old woman started to run the feather along the helpless girl's legs, going from her foot all the way up her leg, across her panties, and then down the other leg. The girl went hysterical with laughter. "HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! PLEAHAHAHAHASEHEHEHEHEHE STAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAP!", the girl screamed, but it didn't do her any good.

The old lady continued this method of tickling for about 20 minutes, which caused the girl to faint. The mom was still awake, looking over in fear, because she knew it was her turn again. But the old lady just hit her with her cane to make her faint.

The next morning, the mom and daughter found themselves lying untied on the basement floor. After that they decided never to be the loud, obnoxious neighbors everybody hated anymore.

This story was a request made by ZUHAIRGUTIERREZ. This user wanted a story in which a mom and her daughter are being tickled by an old woman because they're too loud.

P.S. Sorry it took me so long to write this, but I've been really busy. Also, this will be the last request I'm taking, that isn't anime related. I hope it's fit for the last of its kind ;)
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Is it bad that like this? I'm not trying to offend you, I'm sorry if I did; and poor girl. Isn't she being punished for her mother's actions?
Fluffle258 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2015
Don't worry about it. I'm not offended ;)
I'm glad you like it and thanks for the fave :)
QobecWilliams Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2015
Welcome and okay ^^
HappyTriangle Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Student Writer
I love it!
Fluffle258 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013
Thank you very much :D
I'm glad you like it :)
ZUHAIRGUTIERREZ Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
THANX! for the story, Its really amazing, congratulations fluffle.
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