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Old Ladies have Fetishes too

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One day a 16 year old girl with long blonde hair was going to the mall with her friends. She was the most cute out of all of them. This was partially do to the fact that she was wearing a white t-shirt that exposed her bare belly. This complimented her blue eyes quite nicely.

Aside from that, she was also wearing denim shorts and sneakers. This entire outfit showed everyone how cute and attractive she was. Not only that, it showed off her beautiful tanned skin as well.

Anyway, she was going to the mall with her friends and they went into a whole bunch of stores. All the while our heroine was aware of the presence of a mysterious old lady who had been following them for quite sometime. It was really starting to make the girl feel uncomfortable because, first of all, the old lady was paying close attention to her and secondly, the old lady had a creepy smile on her face.

After a bit of walking the girls friends started to go back home. This girl was now all alone with none of her friends around her, and the old lady was still watching her very closely.

The mall was almost completely empty now and this is when the old lady approached the young girl. Now that the old lady was closer the girl could accurately deduce that she was around 80 years old, so skinny you'd think she starved herself and an ugly, wrinkled old face. She wasn't wearing any make-up and had gray curly hair.

When the old lady was close enough to speak to the girl she said, "My dear, you have such an adorable tummy." This really made the girl uncomfortable especially when the old lady started rubbing and patting her belly. This caused the girl to giggle since that was her most ticklish spot. "Stohohop.", she said but the old lady ignored her plea. The girl was seriously creeped out now and moved away from the old lady, but she would always block the young girl's path.

"If you think I'm gonna let you get away from me after you just giggled like that, you're sadly mistaken. I'll be tickling your tummy for a while!", the old lady said. The old lady pushed the girl to the ground and sat down next to her, once again beginning to pat and rub her belly. The girl was now giggling like crazy, unable to hold back the giggles. And what's worse, there was no one around to help her.

The patting and rubbing continued for five minutes until the old lady decided to start actually tickling the poor girl. Now she was thrown into a fit of laughter. Quite literally "rofling". "STOHOHOHAHAHAHAP! YOHOHOHOHU CREHEHEHEHEHEHEP!!!", the poor girl would beg, but her tormentor was no where near done tickling her.

After ten minutes of endless tickles the old lady gave her a brake. The girl was to worn out from the tickling to get up and walk away. "Ok", the old lady began, "I will cease tickling you now." The girl was so happy now. She thought it was over. But all of a sudden she felt the old ladies fingers digging into her belly and she began kneading her belly. "This is just like kneading dough for when I bake bread.", the old lady said. This made caused the girl to giggle yet again and soon she was at the mercy of the old lady once again. "I thohohohhahahaught yohohuhohoh said you wheheheheherehehe done!", the girl complained. "I lied.", retorted the old lady.

The girl was in hell. She couldn't bear this torture anymore. The old lady had stopped and again the girl felt relief, although it was short-lived. The old lady had naimly put her index finger into the bellybutton of this poor girl and started to wiggle it around. The poor girl went hysterical with laughter. "NOHOHOHOHHAHAHA!!! PLEAHAHASEHEHEHEHE THAHAHAHAT TICKLES!!! HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!", the girl screamed. All the while she had been squirming and squealing on the floor of the mall which was deserted.

While the girl was kicking and screaming on the floor, the old lady was enjoying every bit of the girls torture and teased her with an occasional "Coochie coo", that is until one of the girls kicks managed to hit the old lady and she fell backward. She was unconscious.

Once the girl realized this, she quickly fled the mall and never spoke of this horrible incident again. She never saw the old lady again either.

                                         THE END
This was a request made by Karma-Beetle. This user wanted me to write a story in which an old lady tickles a teenage girl. There really isn't much else to say about it.

P.S. I am open to requests but I only do stories, and it depends on what kind of story.
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harleygirl43's avatar

This may be too old to ask for a request but I would love a tickle story involving a beautiful 24 year old girl and 3 guys around the same age who tickle her whole body mercilessly!